20 mistakes that you should avoid Basic Level – 2 November 2010 If is a sunny day, I like go out and go swimming If it is a sunny day, I like going out and going swimming We enjoyed very much in a concert last Friday We enjoyed ourselves a lot in a concert…. Other day I went to the beach, I love sunbathe! (on) another day, I went ….. I love sunbathing After, my friend ate an apple and other ate a burger After that/Then my friend had… and another one had… …one of my friends had … and another one had… When I arrived to Italy, all was wonderfull. Go to Italy was my sleep When I arrived in Italy, everything was wonderful. Going to Italy was my dream I went to the beach every days, my holidays was perfect I went… every day / all days, my holidays were perfect When I was child, I had terror to the height When I was a child, I was afraid/terrified of heights We spent four days there and we can see many things We spent four days…and we could see many things I did a travel around the island, it went fantastic I travelled/I took a trip around the island,it was fantastic I didn’t sleep nothing during 24 hours I didn’t sleep at all for 24 hours On my holidays I like doing 2 things: to eat and to sleep …I like doing two things: eating and sleeping Too there are two interestings parks There are two interesting parks too/as well There are also two interesting parks We can’t went to a picnic. The children cried a few. We couldn’t go to the picnic. The children cried a little. This holidays were very excited, but the travelling was very long These holidays were very exciting, but the trip / the journey / the flight was very long We arrived on friday morning to Paris, we went the Louvre Museum, that is beautiful We arrived in Paris on Friday morning, we went to the Louvre Museum, which is beautiful I always wear my camera with me, I take photos of all: animals, plants… I always carry/have my camera with me, I take photos of everything: animals, plants… I go to run during one hour becouse I like it too much and it is relaxed I go running for one hour because I like it a lot and it is relaxing On the weekends I have a lunch later. At weekends, I have lunch later Go to the beach it’s always the same history. Going to the beach is always the same story I don’t mind where I go, only I want to going out I don’t mind where I go, I only want to go out.